Man... I don’t know what to say. I like the way you write. The best writing advice I’ve ever read is to write prose as if it was poetry. You nailed it. But that ending though was a bit too dark for me. Maybe because I’m a Mom. Everybody have their limits. Nevertheless, it was impressive! 🩶
Man... I don’t know what to say. I like the way you write. The best writing advice I’ve ever read is to write prose as if it was poetry. You nailed it. But that ending though was a bit too dark for me. Maybe because I’m a Mom. Everybody have their limits. Nevertheless, it was impressive! 🩶
Thank you very much.
There actually a redemption arc...
First into the lowest hell, then the climb out...
I am a dad, I tried to imagine the most horrific thing.
That scene came from the resulting nightmare.